Nightmare June 12, 2010
Posted by KJ theBookGirl in Thoughts.Tags: descends, destroys, hopelessness, nightmare
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And the spiralling nightmare
descends
no longer free, no longer strong,
falling from the dark, growling clouds,
plummeting from heights, beyond stars.
It crashes, tumbling, destroying,
devastating.
And as it shrouds the world I live (a cloth of terror),
the absence of light deepens.
There is no glimmer.
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Deep words that produces fear of an actual nightmare…Nice constructive abilities…Cheers!!!
such a dark experience described perfectly…nice writing!
and that is a scary place to be…
vivid image,
hope that you wake up fresh and new today!
this poem is very powerful. nicely done
chilling. the poem has dark imagery and sudden and sharp movements. i like it.
That’s quite a nightmare, and quite a description! Thanks for sharing.
scary poem but a beautiful description of a nightmare
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Awesome!! I liked it.